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Collateral Damage Book Review

2011-12-28T08:42:00.000-08:00

“Collateral Damage” by H. Terrell Griffin:

Griffin pens another great mystery as he floods our senses with terrifying situations in “Collateral Damage.”

Once again, retired attorney Matt Royal is knee deep in a quagmire. His old U.S. Army Special Forces comrade Charles Desmond—who Matt called Doc back in their service days—needs his help. Desmond’s son is gunned down on a beach and hopes that Matt can use his skill and contacts from when he practiced law to find the killer(s).

But it’s more than finding out who killed Desmond’s son. Drugs are involved as are other murders, all mixed with a few Asians who try to kill Matt. His friend, who has more power than anyone other than the President of the United States, Jock Algren, comes to Longboat Key, Florida to help Matt.

Matt is plagued with clues meant to misdirect him from figuring out what was really going on. He uncovers heart wrenching information when he finds out Doc has been funding an entity that is suspected of illegal crimes for the past five years. His friend and someone he hopes to be eventually intimate with, J.D. Duncan, disappears and is shown on a bank camera withdrawing a large sum of money from an account also associated with those who are trying to kill Matt. Is Doc part of the drug running? Is J.D. really on the wrong side of the law?

Griffin takes us on one hell of a ride through some rocky waters to reach the conclusion. Just when you think you’ve reached a calm stream, you’re thrown back into calamitous seas, much like a river boat rafting.

As I have come to expect from Griffin, this novel is well done and keeps you on the edge the entire time.

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions”

Chasing Ghosts Book Review

2011-12-27T07:44:00.000-08:00

“Chasing Ghosts Texas Style” by Brad and Barry Klinge with Kathy Passero:

Who believes in the paranormal? Do unexplained occurrences happen all the time? How would we know if the slamming of a door was a phenomenon and not the wind? Brad and Barry Klinge can tell you and that’s exactly what they do in “Chasing Ghosts Texas Style.”

This is a detailed accounting of the ups and downs of Everyday Paranormal, their business of ghost hunting. They use science and the latest equipment in their investigations. They regale us with stories of these, some turning creepy and others ending with zilch. Of course, there are those ‘psychics’ or ‘mediums’ thrown in who believe they can solve many of the mysteries. Instead, what they cause is chaos through unfounded falsified evidence, giving the Klinge brothers bad reputations and thwarting their attempts to prove the actual existence of phenomena.

If you’re not a believer in the paranormal, that’s okay. I have a feeling you’re going to walk away questioning yourself. A great read with factual events (as far as you can get with the paranormal). Now, if I could partake in one of their investigations…

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions”

Ivanovich Series NOW IN PAPERBACK!

2011-12-26T11:08:00.000-08:00

In anticipation of the release of the third in the Ivanovich series,"One Major Mistake," both "In the Name of Revenge" and "Deadly Decisions," the first and second respecrtively in the series are NOW IN PAPERBACK. You can order them from www.amazon.com or www.barnesandnoble.com.

I'm also running a FREE BOOK GIVEAWAY for both the first and second in the series on www.goodreads.com from now through January 2, 2012. Go to goodreads and search for Starr Reina.

"One Major Mistake" will be released in March 2012 in both ebook and PAPERBACK.

Please remember that I always enjoy receiving comments and/or questions. Email me at sreina@queenwriter.com or of course, you may email me through any of my social networking sites.

Bitter Legacy - Book Review

2011-12-19T11:30:00.000-08:00

“Bitter Legacy” by H. Terrell Griffin:

Just as the motor moves along character Royal’s boat Recess on Florida’s waters, author H. Terrell Griffin propels the reader forward to Bitter Legacy’s conclusion. Chapter by chapter and line by line, Griffin snags the reader’s attention and doesn’t let go.

Retired attorney Matt Royal wanted nothing more than to spend carefree days on Longboat Key. Unfortunately, they are not as relaxed as he imagined; instead he is shot at and practically blown up. Royal and his longtime friend Logan Hamilton are smack dab in the middle of a fatal riddle. Someone wants them dead and they have no idea why. Despite the aid of Royal’s best friend Jock Algren and others, Royal endures a week from hell. Amidst fighting off hired members of from a coldblooded biker gang hired by a cosseted billionaire with nothing else to do, Royal and friends discover an old document that could rein down financial devastation to the affluent of Florida.

In walks Jennifer Duncan, the newest officer to join the ranks of Longboat Key’s finest. Her apparent good looks and easy laugh could distract Royal and be his undoing at a time when he needs his wits about him.

Through the weaving of some very well-defined characters, Griffin subliminally makes the reader turn the pages. Once you start, you’ll find this is one book you won’t be able to set aside. In the words of Matt Royal, “… and that’s the way it went.”

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions"

An Uninvited Ghost Book Review

2011-12-14T14:40:00.000-08:00

“An Uninvited Ghost” by E.J. Cooperman:

An owner of a haunted guesthouse, her mother and daughter, seven live guests from a senior’s tour, two resident ghosts, visiting ghosts, a television crew filming a reality show, a detective, a missing television star, and murder make up this intriguing story. And Cooperman weaves it flawlessly.

Alison Kerby, the guesthouse owner agrees to act as a private investigator to the world of bodiless souls as long as both Maxie and Paul, the two resident ghosts, play the role of themselves for her guests using tricks. Great way to bring in paying visitors, right? While it sounds like a great idea, things go astray when a blind ghost, Scott McFarlane, appears and Paul requests Alison to take Scott on as a client to investigation a possible mishap. Scott and Paul want Alison to find out if he actually killed a woman—Arlice Crosby—when he was ‘spooking’ her. The good news is he didn’t. The bad news is someone else did. Not at the time Scott thought she died, but right in Alison’s house. Alison found out Arlice was alive and well and invited her to a séance she was hosting that night as one of her tricks for the guests. During the performance, Arlice is killed. The detective Anita McElone believes it to be one of Alison’s guests. Paul, Maxie and Alison all join efforts and investigate on their own—much to Anita’s chagrin—to find out who killed Arlice and why.

Meanwhile, Tiffney, one of the television stars present at the filming of a reality show in Alison’s guesthouse, disappears and Trent the producer wants Alison to find out where she is.

There is ghostly foul play and many suspects in this enjoyable paranormal cozy (at least that’s the genre I place it in). You won’t be disappointed if you pick this one up!

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions”

"Aloha From Hell" Book Review

2011-12-05T10:24:00.000-08:00

“Aloha From Hell” by Richard Kadrey:

The title alone makes you speculate about what in the hell this book is about. It’s a Sandman Slim novel that takes you from Earth to Hell to Heaven and back around again.

Sandman Slim is half mortal, half something. Some say monster, others say angel. I’ll let you be the judge. The major players are Sandman Slim, of course, Lucifer, God and many other evil beings all trying to make Heaven into Hell and vice versa or just eradicate everything. Sandman Slim has his own agenda. First, save his ex-lover Alice from Hell. She was brought there from Heaven by a villain named Mason to entice Sandman Slim to go to Hell to get her. And he does more than just save Alice. That’s the second part. For me to simply saying he wants to kill Mason is not near adequate. There are no words for what Sandman Slim goes through to accomplish his objections. You really need to read the book in order to understand.

Full of action, wit and suspense, this grabbed a hold of me and wouldn’t let go. Kadrey is a master storyteller (overused, I know, but very apt) and he will have you rooting for him in Hell and on Earth.

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions,” published by Suspense Publishing, an imprint of Suspense Magazine

Book Review

2011-11-18T15:47:00.000-08:00

“A Hard Day’s Fright” by Casey Daniels:

Pepper Martin works in a cemetery, so why not talk to ghosts and solve murders for them? It’s a perfect fit for her, even if she sometimes doesn’t want to do it.

In this witty, enjoyable novel, Pepper is visited by a ghost from the 60s. Forty five years after her death, Lucy Pasternak asks Pepper to find her body so she can rest. It turns out Lucy was none other than the best friend of Pepper’s coworker and good friend Ella. That’s helpful, but not enough because Ella wasn’t present when Lucy was killed. And Lucy’s body was never found, so many, including Ella, assumed Lucy just ran away.

Thrown into the mix is Ella’s wild teenager Ariel, who mimics her by dressing, acting and investigating like Pepper does. Ariel shadows her and even tries to look into things on her own and Pepper has to now look out for her as well.

Will Pepper actually be able to put this soul to rest after so many years? This amusing book will keep you turning the pages to find out if Pepper (and Ariel?) can do it.

Reviewed by Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions,” published by Suspense Publishing, an imprint of Suspense Magazine

Destinations of Solitude

2011-11-17T16:19:00.000-08:00

I am sharing this article that appeared in October's edition of Suspense Magazine. Enjoy!

Destinations of Solitude
By Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions”

The kids are crying, the spouse needs your attention, the boss wants you to do something in a hurry. Sound familiar?

This is not an article to tell you how to write around that, to get out of it or to include it as a commentary or descriptive narrative in your next chapter. I’m not going to tell you how important writing is and how you should do it every day. I’m not even going to tell you how to write or what verb, adverb, etc. you should use.

What I am going to do is share some terrific places where you can run off and find some solitude to do what you do best. Some I’ve actually been to, others I dream of going to. Because I live on the West Coast, I'm going to start here.

A place I love going to that is not full to the rim with seasonal vacationers is Idyllwild, California. It’s an absolute delight nestled in the San Jacinto Mountains above Palm Springs. Many have never heard of it, which is good if you’re looking for a great getaway to find peace and quiet to write. It’s a very quaint small town offering jazz concerts, art exhibits, and numerous hiking trails. There are cabins aplenty to settle you, a computer and printer, if needed. Here are a few examples:

Woodland Park Manor is one of my favorites. It has a bungalow that makes you feel you’re all alone in the woods, but in reality are minutes from town. This particular cabin I stayed in had a small kitchen and is big enough for two. But you don’t need two, remember? You’re supposed to be up there alone, unless you’re taking your dog (or cat).

Quiet Creek Inn also boasts of privacy and yes, you guessed it, ‘quiet.’ Here you can serenely contemplate that next scene as you sit creek side. It’s cozy and the scenery is beautiful. The accommodations are comfortable and top-notch.

There are many more places in Idyllwild you can stay at. I suggest you Google the town. You’ll be amazed at what you see. But please, please, please don’t tell too many people. I like it without so many tourists. I can’t hear the bears if too many people are romping around in the woods. Oh, I meant I can’t write if I hear too many people. Yeah, that’s it.

Most everyone has heard of and/or been to Big Bear, California. Again in the mountains, it boasts more tourists than Idyllwild. But don’t let the shops and lakes distract you. They too have plenty of boarding in which you can do what you went there to do: write in solitude.

Fortunately, I know someone with a cabin in Big Bear. I love that little retreat. Although much bigger than what I need for little ol’ me and my computer, I go and spend some glorious days hitting my fingers on my keyboard as I look out at the lake. As in Idyllwild, there are many hiking and biking trails here. And there are more people. I suggest if you go here, don’t stay right in town. Here are a few places that might interest you:

Cienaga Creek Ranch flaunts breathtaking views of the Pacific Crest Trail. This place is remote enough to make you feel lost to the rushed, over-populated world, but close enough to everything to remind you that civilization still exists.

Shore Acres Lodge has some nice places to stay as well. Most of the cabins have views of the lake, which we all know is relaxing just to sit and look at. Why not take your computer out and sit on the porch? One or more of their cabins sit right at Big Bear Lake. You can wake up and go outside and watch the sunrise. But then, get to work. You’re up there to write, aren’t you?

Let’s leave the lakes and creeks for a bit and go visit the ocean. The White Water Inn in Cambria seems like a nice place. It’s situated across from the vast area of water and has views where you can sit and watch the waves while penning the next great shark novel. Maybe “Jaws Goes to Cambria” or something.

Breakfast in bed anyone? It seems that the Cambria Shores Inn will bring it to you. What a way to vacation. Get up, have someone serve your morning meal, sit down and start writing. After your fingers have worked up a hunger, you can then walk to the office for snacks. Geesh, you may not need to leave this place. Well you might consider dinner. But not before you get a lot of those chapters done you’ve been putting off.

Okay, enough of California. There’s more on the West Coast to see than that. Come on, let’s take a stroll up to British Columbia. Antoinetta’s West Coast Retreat has a Tahsis heritage home in the original Tahsis Town site. When you need a break, you can hike or go check out the marina. If that doesn’t do it for you, maybe fishing at the Vancouver Island might spark some ideas for your next setting.

Grants Pass in Oregon can be a welcoming refuge from the daily grind. Set on Oregon’s Rogue River, there are many places to stay and visit. Applegate Valley Ranch is in the center of Applegate Valley Wine Trail. But please, no alcohol until you’ve had a full day of typing at least ten full chapters.

Double Tree Ranch near Grants Pass speaks of a secluded and serene setting along the Rogue River. Views aplenty with the river and wooded areas. It just may be inspirational for that horror scene you’re planning to write.

So there are just a few places on the West Coast, throwing British Columbia in the mix that should set your mind to thinking. Get the hand scale going—distracting home life while trying to write the ending of your next great novel vs. a quiet retreat boasting of awesome views and serenity? What will it be?

If the West Coast isn’t for you, stay tuned. Next month, I’ll jump to another part of the United States. In the meantime, start Googling for your private getaway. I know I am.

On Location Article

2011-09-05T15:13:00.000-07:00

I wanted to share this article with you all that was released in Suspense Magazine. Here you go:

On Location
The Coexistence of the Past and Present
Ghost City Inn, Jerome, Arizona
By
Starr Gardinier Reina

Not even 125 years and an explosion can have an effect on Jake Stark and Grandma Garcia's sanctuary. Jerome holds special—and sometimes traumatic—memories for them. They have their reasons for clinging to life and their choice of residence is the Ghost City Inn.

The City of Jerome, Arizona sits atop what's called Cleopatra Hill between Flagstaff and Prescott. Born to house mining operations and their workers from the early 1800s, the city was no stranger to violence. It was dubbed the 'Wickedest Town in the West', but is now home to its legendary ghosts and various artists.

Having read about the Ghost City Inn and its charming inhabitants, I booked our vacation purposely to include a several day stay. I let my husband, not the first person to jump on a ghostly band wagon, believe I figured the inn and the city would be fascinating and tried to convince him that the talk of ghosts was merely media hype. But devious is what I was when I requested the Verde View Room, which is supposedly the most haunted of this bed and breakfast.
The inn has six bedrooms and is absolutely appealing with its uneven floors, secluded spots and doors with unusually low doorknobs. This latter is because Grandma Garcia was a short woman and they were adjusted for her specifications. There we met Jackie Muma, owner and hostess of the Ghost City Inn—no, she's not a ghost. Stories abound in this quaint place and Jackie was more than happy to share them. One of the first things she told me was she didn't realize when she purchased the building ten years ago that the bed and breakfast would have permanent guests—courtesy of the times of yore. Perhaps something happened while the Christian couple owned it because, Jackie admitted, "they were in a hurry to sell it" and Escrow closed within thirty days.

What some scoffed at as funny pranks, Jackie found no humor in. Keys would be missing, only to turn up later. Old-time music could be heard coming from the Verde View Room, even though Jackie unplugged the radio and ensured there were no backup batteries. One of the craziest things that happened to her was when during one of the many times her cell phone was not where she left it. Jackie asserted that after searching, she ultimately found it in the refrigerator, of all places. She is positive she did not place it there and no one else was in the building at the time. It became irritating to her after a while and someone suggested she ask whoever was playing these games to stop. She went room to room asking them to "please leave me alone" and even prayed. Since then, she has not been the brunt of any of the annoyances. Guests however, are a different story.

One of the repeat visitors is none other than the woman who purchased it in 1920. Simply known as Grandma Garcia, this short, hunched woman lived on the premises until her death in 1978 in what is currently the Cleopatra Hill Room. She acted as caretaker for the Garcia House—its name while under her ownership—and the miners frequenting it, cooking all the meals for them when they woke from their eight-hour shifts. At some point during these years, the Garcia House was also a bootleg liquor site; that is, until a still exploded. This incident left Grandma Garcia terrified of any open flames in the house, such as candles or lighters. The damages the blast caused to the upper floor are still apparent. According to Jackie, the eaves under the roof are still charred.

Grandma Garcia has been known to appear in her old room in a wispy, transparent image. Guests who have stayed in the Cleopatra Hill Room have reported minor incidents. Cigarettes would not be where a person left them and would later show up somewhere else. Lighters disappeared, sometimes never to be located or found in the toe of a shoe. Another guest reported Grandma Garcia shook her index finger at them as they smoked outside the room on the patio. One of the sisters in a Spanish family who all stayed there claimed Grandma Garcia began swearing at her in their language, accusing her of doing things she shouldn't be. The woman confessed to her family and Jackie she had been doing something wrong, although refused to say what it was, and after the occurrence, vowed to stop. Yet another guest was said to have been woken by what felt like a hand caressing her cheek. Is Grandma Garcia still there as a caretaker? Is she watching over her home and taking care of guests as she did for so many years? Is she trying to thwart potential disasters due to fire? No matter the reason, her granddaughter Oralee, who now resides in California, felt her presence at the inn when she visited. Oralee shared stories with Jackie of when she was a little girl staying there.

Another event occurred in the Western Room. A woman woke in the middle of the night to use the bathroom. When she saw herself in the mirror, she was startled. She was wearing red lipstick. Half asleep, she wiped it off and went back to bed. In the morning, she thought she dreamt the entire episode. But she hadn’t. In the bathroom’s trash can, she found a tissue with red lipstick on it she couldn’t explain. The guest told Jackie she didn’t wear lipstick at all, only clear Chapstick. It was an enigma and she had no idea how she ended up with lipstick on in the middle of the night. Was this a practical joke of Grandma Garcia’s? Did she apply the red lipstick to the guest’s lips as she slept?

Grandma Garcia is not the only paranormal manifestation at the Ghost City Inn. When Jackie first purchased the bed and breakfast, there was a shared bathroom upstairs between the Northern Exposure Room and the Verde View Room outside of the common area. Jackie was vacuuming in this vicinity when a man walked past her and into the bathroom. She turned the vacuum off and called out to him that he was not allowed to use the bathroom, that it was for guests only. He ignored her and continued on. Not wanting to barge in, she knocked on the stall and repeated her request that he leave. After getting no response, she trod further into the bathroom only to find it empty. The only exit would have been out the bathroom window, which Jackie stated, he could not have possibly done, or through the door. She is still emphatic that he did not walk past her. Jackie described the man as three-dimensional. He was a “solid person with long, grey hair and wearing a long duster”. It appeared as if he was just coming in after a hard day of work, looking haggard and dirty. She went looking for him and checked every room. She was not able to find the man neither upstairs nor in the inn at all.

Some time later, a woman guest checked in. Shortly after getting her room, she came back down and reported to Jackie she had seen a solid man with a full, grey beard, grey hair sporting a long duster coat. Jackie was astounded; she had proof now she hadn’t lost her mind when she previously saw him. This woman had described the same person she spotted. It turned out her guest was a medium and told her who this person was. He was a cattle herder, according to this medium, who used to come to Jerome once a month, stay at the inn and spend his wage in town. His name was Jake Stark. When asked, the medium said he had not been killed in the inn.

If Jackie had any doubts about the validity of this woman or her story, it was soon abated when the medium revealed things about Allen—Jackie's husband—and herself that she was certain no one could have known. According to what Jackie told me, Allen at the time had been having back problems. The medium warned her he needed to take care of the problem or would end up having back surgery. Just a few short weeks later, Allen went in for the operation. As to Jackie, she confessed she still financially assisted her young adult son, who no longer lived with her. As any parent would, Jackie had trouble denying her son when he needed help and just that morning, she sent him money she previously secreted away without anyone knowing, not even Allen. The medium’s knowledge of this personal information convinced Jackie of her authenticity. She now knew without a doubt the medium was not a fake and the man she’d seen upstairs was Jake Stark.

This medium was not the only person who Jake Stark revealed himself to. Jackie narrated another story to me. Approximately three or four years ago, a man staying there was awakened in the middle of the night by Jake. He was forced to stay up until he physically put on paper words Jake demanded he write: “Cecil Thompson did it.” After he did this, Jake allowed the man to go back to sleep. In the morning, the guest met Jackie at the door and told her what happened and asked her if she knew who Cecil Thompson was. She didn’t. According to Jackie, researched revealed that the Thompson family were villains living in Jerome in the late 1800s who were forcibly kicked out of the town. Is it possible Jake was killed by Cecil? Is Jake’s spirit still there because of the violent way his life ended?

Although this story is not about me, I’m pretty sure you’re wondering about our stay. Human curiosity begs the question: did I or my husband see anything? My answer is: unfortunately not. My husband’s answer is: thank god, no. Do I personally believe? Absolutely. I would have loved to have seen Jake or Grandma Garcia. If I had, I planned on asking them questions: what happened to them? Why are they still here? Are they perhaps stuck here waiting for something or someone?

I might get another chance to question them because we do plan on going back again. Well, I first have to convince my husband because on the morning we were to check out, I confessed to him just how haunted this inn and city supposedly are. So he knows if we go back, he could end up wearing red lipstick in the morning. Why didn’t I tell him before or as we arrived? He believes just as I do, which is the problem. And he most certainly does not share the same enthusiasm of running into them or having his sleep disturbed. If he sees or hears anything, he might just go running down the hill, screaming like a little girl.

Is this really all true? Do things go bump in the night at the Ghost City Inn and in Jerome? You be the judge. Go stay there. Maybe Jake and/or Grandma Garcia will appear. If they do, you need not worry. They are harmless and more pranksters than anything. If you see them, ask them my questions, but please share the responses with me. I’m curious to know. Aren’t you?

To learn more about Starr Gardinier Reina, author of “Deadly Decisions” visit her website at www.QueenWriter.com.

QueenWriter Newsletter/Blog

2011-09-05T11:56:00.000-07:00

Welcome to the newest version of my Newsletter/Blog. Please give your thoughts and/or comments by emailing me at sreina@QueenWriter.com.

BACK TO SCHOOL TIME!

Summer is technically over, so why are we still getting this heat? As I sit here and type this to you, it's a mere 94 degrees heading toward evening hours. Now that the children are back in school (or almost for some), have you decided what you'll do with all that extra spare time? I have a suggestion or two. Yes, I bet you can imagine that I'll tell you to read. You are correct. I'll start with not-so-ashamedly marketing my own work for your perusal. If you haven't yet read my Ivanovich series, now's a good time. You can go http://www.QueenWriter.com to find out what the series is about and where to get it. But, don't stop at my books, check out the two featured authors below. They are my two picks for the fall (other than mine of course!).

My Latest Adventures

I'm diligently working on the 3rd in my Ivanovich series. I'm hoping to have "One Major Mistake" in your hands by year's end. A paranormal is being penned at the same time. That one probably won't be released until 2012. I'll keep you all updated.

I'm still editing for ARR Editing. That keeps me busy as well. As do my duties at Suspense Magazine. You can stay more up-to-date with my frivolous (and important) news simply by following me on Twitter and checking me out on Facebook and on Goodreads.

Enough about me for the time being. Let me show you my fall picks. Read the Features below.

Presenting Donald Allen Kirch and Vicki Tyley

Let's start with Donald. Now please understand Donald isn't chosen first for any particular reason. If you must have one, let's blame the alphabet.

Donald Allen Kirch lives in Kansas City, Missouri, where he writes every day, with the exception of Christmas Day and his birthday. Born in Los Angeles, California, he has lived in 22 states and visited 32. His interests are history, Sherlock Holmes Mysteries, and the study of Strange Phenomena. In 2004, he had the opportunity to stay at the famous "Sallie House" in Atchison, Kansas, where he was attacked by a ghost. Visit his website to see more at website: www.donaldallenkirch.com.

Just a bio is rather boring, so I thought I'd throw a few questions his way. Listen to what he has to say (and don't miss my comments):

Starr for QueenWriter (QW): Tell us a little bit about yourself. Something that readers wouldn't see in your bio.

Donald Allen Kirch (DAK): There's an interesting story about my birth my mother always told me. I was originally born triplets. However, the other two were stillborn. There had been an earthquake during my birth, and my mother said that I had an unusual birthmark which looked like a little Jewish cap. It dissapeared without a trace after my fifth birthday. A nurse who was Jewish thought I was the Messiah. Think about it: I was born "three" symbolizing a trinity, I was born during an earthquake -- a rather loud way to announce a birth, in Los Angeles "City of the Angels," and on the day gold was discovered in California. Not to mention the fact that my family name is the German word for "church." The nurse tried to convince my mother and dad that I was "the chosen of God." My mother finally said, "Lady, if the Jewish Messiah's going to be born, I assure you it won't be to a Catholic family!" But, my mom was known for her own "tall tales." (Smile) Whether it's true or not...I can't say. I have always considered it the most "unusual" part of my life.

That was an interesting piece about Donald. Shall we start calling him the 'chosen'? That's up to you.

QW: How did you become interested in writing? Is it something you've always wanted to do or is this more of an adult career choice?

DAK: We moved around a lot when I was a kid, so I was always the "new kid" in school. I was shy and awkward, and not really that good at sports, so writing was my way to shine. I used to write stories and share them with the class. They all seemed to like them, and I got hooked on the idea of creating more. I would love to write full time. Writing defines who I am in my eyes. I couldn't give it up if I tried. I love it more than the act of breathing.

And Donald, if I say so myself, you do it well. Keep writing, please.

QW: You show an interest in the paranormal. Can you tell us what aroused this interest? Was it one thing that happened to you?

DAK: I do believe that there is more to the world than what science has to offer. Do not get me wrong. I am a logical man, but logic should never eliminate mystery. To do so is to ignore the very elements of life. I became interested in the paranormal when I was around thirteen. There was a TV series called "In Search Of..." Each week it would come on, and for thirty minutes I would escape into the wonderful mysteries the series' host, Leonard Nimoy, would offer. From ghosts to unsolved crimes, it was the best! I had a lot of fun with the show. Later, I became a paranormal investigator, and have had my share of encounters with things that go bump in the night. And...yes...I do believe in ghosts.

So, Don, what were the encounters? Maybe we'll get an answer in the next interview?

QW: Your website boasts of four published novels, and two novellas, one of which is serialized. Do you write short stories and if so, do you have any published?

DAK: I have tried to write short stories, but they keep growing on me. Short stories are hard for me because, simply, I do not know where to stop. Not that I haven't tried. I have one short story of less than a thousand words entitled "I Am," but the subject matter is so controversial that I feel it could never be published. It is the story of what goes through an unborn child's mind during an abortion. Too hot for this day and age.

Personally, Don, I know you can do it. I'm hoping to see some short stories soon. I'm sure your readers would as well.

Don trying to look serious, but not quite making it.

QW: I see you have a degree in Radio and Television Arts. Have you worked in this area? How did you get started and what does it involve?

DAK: I am licensed to operate radio equipment in a studio, video editing, and copyrighting. I love to create interesting commercials and did well at it, but the pay was not that good. Still, it has helped me with my communications skills...I hope.

Okay, I'll go out on a limb and say, yes, it has.

QW: "Manchester House" has stayed in my mind since I've read it. Can you tell us what spurred this book?

DAK: Manchester House was inspired by a ghost attack. I am quite possibly the only writer of my genre who can claim to have been attacked by a ghost. Back in 2004, I was doing research for my novel and wanted to get involved with some real ghost hunters. I knew of a house in Atchison, Kansas called "The Sallie House." I knew of it when it was called "The Heartland Haunting" on Fox's series "Sightings." So, when offered a chance to go, I went!

Our team just had a weird experience in the nursery, and I had been traveling down the staircase, heading back into the kitchen, taking notes. Suddenly, I felt a pair of very adult hands grab me by the shoulders, and a pair of child's hands grab me by the ankles. This caused me to pause. All at once, the adult hands pushed and the child hands pulled. If it had not been for my instincts to push against the wall and staircase, I could have tumbled down the stairs. Very scary stuff! Later, I ventured into the hole in the basement, behind the furnace -- got scratched up on my neck and arms -- never felt a thing. Only knew it happened when a female on our team pointed it out. Freaked her out more than me.

There was also a cameraman who got so sick, that we never saw him again. Don't know why, or what he felt.

Oh, here is the answer to the 'encounter' question above.

QW: What type of research do you do for your novels? For instance, "The Christ Project" seems like it called for quite a bit.

DAK: The Christ Project is my favorite book. Most of the research required understanding of genetic makeup, religious faith, and history on the Shroud of Turin. There were characters in this book that haunted me, and took me almost a decade to finish. In the end, it's a story we will all face in our life: Are we the property of "The State," or free souls created in the image of God? In these troubled times, when evil things are being done all in the name of religion, how would we all react if "The State" took away our fundamental need to pray?

Some good questions here. Some that will problem remain unanswered.

QW: What's on your agenda now and in the future? Do you have a new book release you can tell us about?

DAK: I have two new books coming out soon, and a two more next year! Later this year "The Lurker War" will be released. "The Lurker War" is the sequel to "The Misadventures of Ka-Ron the Knight," a fantasy. Also "Marley: The Other Christmas Carol" will be out in December. Ever wonder what happened to Jacob Marley AFTER he helped Scrooge? Well, now you'll find out. Also, I just signed on for my first mainstream historical book entitled "Selznick's Folly." It's a fictional account on the making of "Gone With the Wind." In 2012, both "Selznick's Folly" and my final installment of the "Ka-Ron the Knight" series will start out the year. "The Return of Ka-Ron the Knight" promises to be quite an exciting read! I am pretty busy right now. :o)

Wow! It sounds like you're quite busy getting things out there for your fans and readers.

For fun:

QW: What is your least favorite thing to do? One that you have to do on a regular basis.

DAK: My least favorite thing to do...I HATE turning off my computer and going to work. I have yet to make a separate peace with my J-O-B.

That sounds familiar. I'm sure many authors, including myself, feel the same way.

QW: You live in Missouri. Tell us one thing you hate about the state and one thing you love.

DAK: I love living in a state where such famous people as Samuel Clemens, Dr. Seuss, and Brad Pitt came from. But like most people from Missouri, I hate the weather. There's an old saying, "If you don't like the weather in Missouri wait ten minutes."

Famous people come from Missouri? Who would have thought? Well, Don, when the weather gets too much, just put the computer screen in front of you and forget all about it.

Thank you, Don for taking the time to speak with me. You are an interesting and very talented man. But I'm sure your readers and fans already know all this!

*****

Don is not the only talented author. Check out Vicki:

Born in New Zealand, Vicki Tyley immigrated with her husband to Australia in 1982. She has traveled extensively, spending a year touring the world before terrorism was an influencing factor. She has lived in the central business districts of large cities, suburbia, idyllic seaside locations, rural areas, bushland, and remote desert mining camps. In the lead up to her writing career, she worked in a multitude of different industries including banking, stockbroking, importing and wholesaling, human resources, mining, hospitality, civil engineering, and toys, in predominantly accounting, IT and management roles. All these life experiences are brought to bear in her writing. Based in rural Victoria, Australia, Vicki Tyley writes fast-paced mystery and suspense novels in contemporary Australian settings.

Now, here are some questions to clear up some mysteries about Vicki:

QW: I noticed on your website you won a children's short story contest. How old were you? What kind of story was it?

Vicki Tyley (VT): My memory is hazy (very), but I do recall I was in primary school, which means I can't have been any older than ten years old. The story involved water and stepping stones, but that's about as much as I can tell you. I wish I'd kept a copy - the magazine it was published in is long defunct - but at that age, you don't tend to think about stuff like that. Or at least, I didn't.

I wouldn't either. My own earlier beginnings of a manuscript when I was fourteen is lost to this world.

QW: You have an eclectic professional background. You mention that health prompted you to finally realize your dream. When did this vision of writing start? Was it when you won the children's short story contest or even before that?

VT: Save for a few isolated flashes and what others tell me, I have little memory of my childhood, but one thing I am certain of is that I've been in love with books since I learned to read. For me, writing was simply a natural extension to reading, a desire to take the baton and run with it, so to speak. Even though I dreamed of writing for a living, I was also a realist, so consigned the idea to the "if only it were possible" basket. That's until I realized that life was too short for if-onlys.

Well said. I echo that sentiment.

Vicki is looking right at you. The eyes are the gateway to the soul. No more mystery.

QW: You write in the mystery genre. Have you tried your hand at any other?

VT: No, but that's only because I write what I prefer to read. I don't read widely enough outside the mystery/thriller genre to feel confident penning, say, a fantasy. I really admire those who can write across the genres, though.

The only way to try is...well, to try. Come on, Vicki. I know you have it in you!

QW: What is one thing-ie. Character trait, style, voice, etc.-that you carry through all of your novels?

VT: That would have to be voice. Although, if you'd even asked me what voice was ten years ago, I think I'd have been hard pushed to tell you. Now, I recognize it as an expression of the writer on the page, as unique as a fingerprint. My novels vary in tone and style, but they are all unmistakably Vicki Tyley mysteries.

They wouldn't be you if we didn't hear 'you.' Voice is important. Take for example this newsletter. If you think that's all I wrote and the only 'voice' I had, you'd think I was nuts!

QW: Many authors state a particular character in their book(s) reflect a trait of their own. Do any of your characters show a trait belonging to you?

VT: I guess if I had to pick one, it'd be determination. I'm not someone who gives up easily. I like to think both my protagonists and antagonists share this trait, albeit with different agendas.

Determination is good. How about taking some of that and trying a new genre? Just askin'. :)

QW: Is there one book or one author that stands out in your mind that may have influenced your writing?

VT: Along the way, many writers have influenced my writing, but if I'm ever asked whose writing mine aspires to, I usually say Erica Spindler. Her writing style is clean, yet engaging, and a pleasure to read - all goals in my own work.

Those aren't goals anymore, Vicki. I think you're realized them. And I do agree with you about Erica.

QW: Other than your website and your blog, is there other marketing you do? What is it?

VT: Word-of-mouth and reviews are my main tools, but for additional exposure, I also invest in a few paid sponsorships/advertisements. Most recently, I've dabbled with Goodreads pay-per-click advertising, with varying degrees of success. Hooking the reader with 140 characters or less can be a challenge.

I also spend time on Kindle Boards, but except for the Book Bazaar, I don't consider it marketing, more a place to socialize with like-minded people.

Feedback is always helpful. Goodreads is not a bad place to advertise. I do it myself there. Marketing can take up a lot of time. Even though it's vital, personally I'd like to spend more time on my writing, but if I don't market, people may forget about me (as if!).

QW: The 'always' questions: What's on your agenda now and in the future? Do you have a new book release you can tell us about?

VT: I've just released my fourth novel, Fatal Liaison: The lives of two strangers, Greg Jenkins and Megan Brighton, become inextricably entangled when they each sign up for a dinner dating agency. Greg's reason for joining has nothing to do with looking for love. His recently divorced sister Sam has disappeared and Greg is convinced that Dinner for Twelve, or at least one of its clients, may be responsible. Neither is Megan looking for love. Although single, she only joined at her best friend Brenda De Luca's insistence. When a client of the dating agency is murdered, suspicion falls on several of the members. Then Megan's friend Brenda disappears without a trace, and Megan and Greg join forces. Will they find Sam and Brenda, or are they about to step into the same inescapable snare?

My plans for now and the future are simple: keep writing. I'm about to escape on holiday/vacation, but I'm already toying with ideas for my next book.

That's sounds like another great novel. I for one can't wait to read it. 'Keep writing' are words to keep close to the heart.

For fun:

QW: Tell us something fun about you that readers wouldn't get a chance to know.

VT: I love picnics. Especially in the bush/forest, where the only sounds and smells are of nature. Doesn't matter whether it's rain, hail or shine, I find time spent in the bush both relaxing and energizing.

'In the bush' must be an Australian term? Picnics are a lot of fun.

Vicki is looking right at you. The eyes are the gateway to the soul. No more mystery.

QW: If you have three wishes (rub a genie's bottle), what would they be?

1) My first wish has nothing to do with writing or books, but love, happiness and health for my loved ones and myself has to come top of any list.

2) The ability to write faster. When it comes to writing, I'm definitely in the tortoise camp. I can't even type as fast as some writer's write.

3) To earn enough income from my writing to sustain a comfortable lifestyle.

I think you stole my three wishes, Vicki. Now, I'll have to go back to the genie and see if he'll give me new ones.

Vicki, thank you as well for speaking with me. Your work sells itself. It's amazing. Check Vicki and her work out at www.vickityley.com.

So, there you have it. Two great authors. Please stand by...Other great authors will be in my next newsletter. I can't say if they'll be as wonderful as interviewees as Don and Vicki, but...You'll just have to read it to find out.

Until next time...

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Now, what in the world am I doing? Those who know me, understand my passion for the written word. It's not just about what I accomplish, but about my fellow writers as well. So many people have helped me get where I am and because of that, I am doing the same. Hence, the reason I am part owner of ARREditing.com. With this company, we offer people the ability to get professional editing and critiquing services at a much more affordable rate than what most companies offer. I would suggest you at least check out our website at www.arrediting.com and see what we offer and the low prices we do it for.

*****

About "Deadly Decisions"

"Deadly Decisions" is crime-driven novel interwoven with drama, suspense, wit and edge-of-your-seat action.

Trouble and misery can be part of life's ordeals, but for Ivanovich and Mancini they are everyday concerns. After his debacle of a life in "In the Name of Revenge", Pavel Ivanovich tries to find a new direction. Instead, his days are upended with the constant turmoil of drama with Teresa Mancini-the spoiled daughter of a mob boss, wanna-be agent and Pavel's girlfriend-thrown in the mix. Bullets fly, bombs explode and people get hurt.

Ivanovich's existence is an entire commotion of murder and mayhem, including a near-death experience and many other, narrow escapes while Mancini tries to become involved waist-deep in every one of Pavel's cases.

Travel with Pavel as he continues with crime-ridden, investigative cases while Teresa 'tries' to help him in "One Major Mistake", the third in the Ivanovich Series, coming soon.

Dialogue

2008-12-05T07:19:00.000-08:00

Good morning. I realize I missed a Friday, but things in my world have been a bit busy, such as in yours, I'm sure.

Welcome back, everyone! We've finished with characters and believability and in the last lesson we tied it all together. Today, we're going to discuss dialogue. Here's what Bonnie Golightly has to say:

Dialogue

•In “Use of Dialogue,” Bonnie Golightly says that: “Clarity in dialogue is a must.” (61),¹ and “A writer of fiction is more or less a word juggler; he must keep many elements of action, plot and background going at the same time. But dialogue is his most useful prop…”(60).² Having characters talk to one another can give the reader insight into who the person is, what role they’re playing and why they’re in the author’s story.

•Additionally, the style of dialogue that is used for each character should show the type of character that is talking. For example, someone who was born and raised in Arkansas may not use proper, clipped words as a person from England might.

1,2 Oates, Joyce Carol. Writer’s Digest Handbook of Short Story Writing. Ohio: Writer’s Digest Books, 1982.

Using Golightly's insight, let's see what you have to "say".

Starr Reina

Putting Together Description and Believability

2008-11-22T15:59:00.000-08:00

Another week has passed and it's almost Thanksgiving. I wish you all a very happy Thanksgiving. Remember what the day is all about. Let's give thanks for those in our lives and for that which is good. But, don't forget to be thankful for all the trials and tribulations we've been through. Without them, we wouldn't be as strong and we probably wouldn't be where we are today.

Today's lesson is one that will put your character's description together with their believability. Let's sum it up.

Character Description and Believability

•Anton Chekhov’s descriptions of the characters in “The Duel” create vivid descriptions, making them believable to the reader. For instance, he describes character Alexander Samoylenko as having “large, close-cropped head, big nose, black bushy eyebrows, grey side-whiskers and no neck to speak of” (17).¹ More than just the physical description, Chekhov shows us Samoylenko’s personality when he writes that Samoylenko “struck all newcomers as an unpleasant army upstart. But about two or three days after the first meeting his face began to strike them as exceptionally kind, amiable, handsome even.” (17).² Because this character is described as being “docile, infinitely kind, good-humoured and obliging.” (17)³, the reader gets a sense that, although he can come across as rough, he is indeed a compassionate man.

1, 2, 3 Chekhov, Anton. The Duel and Other Stories. England: Penguin Group, 1984.

Can you sum it up? Let's see what you can show me. I've been told the best form of flattery is imitation. Imitate Checkhov's character's description and believability. Go ahead, you can do it!

Have fun!

Starr Reina

Character - Believability (Continued)

2008-11-14T10:43:00.000-08:00

I hope everyone is doing well. QueenWriter's lessons are back. Today, we are continuing on with Character Believability. If you need to refresh yourself on the last lesson, please see the archives.

Characters - Believability (Continued)

Another way to explain the importance of the believability of a character is this: let’s say you create a character that is an alcoholic and drug addict and say little else about the character, then he or she suddenly shows up in a three piece business suit without explanation as to why or how, which is the reader going to believe? That he’s a bum or a professional? I venture to say neither. There was no history of the character given, he does not “stand before us with a wonderful clarity.” (45).¹ Who is this character? What does he do? If no details are given, any action this character takes will not be believed by the reader.

1 Garner, John. The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers. New York: A Knofp: Distributed by Random House, 1984.

Today, I don't want to just see your character, I want to believe in your character. If you don't write as a hobby or profession, that's okay. Make one up; it's fun. This isn't just reserved for published authors or those that write that haven't yet been published; it is for everyone.

Show me what you have. You'd be surprised just how create your mind is if you try it and let it flow.

Starr Reina

Special Guest Blogger - Literary Agent

2008-11-02T07:19:00.000-08:00

Today is the day I'm sure many have been looking forward to. I will not be having my normal blog lessons on today. Instead, I am very proud to be interviewing guest blogger, John Raab of the Cliffhanger Literary Agency! Please help me welcome him!

He is sharing some great information here. You are welcome to comment and ask questions of him here on my blog. He will respond to them here. So, without further ado, I now present Mr. John Raab of the Cliffhanger Literary Agency...

Q1. Can you give us a brief overview of who you are and why you became an agent?

I decided to become an agent because there are far to many stories that need to be seen. I think the publishing companies need to expand their libraries to capture these authors. The Cliffhanger Literary Agency is determined to find these authors and give them a voice. We will work for the author and not the publisher to make sure great stories are seen by all.

Q2. What genre do you accept submissions for?

We are looking for Mystery, Thriller and Suspense. This is a broad range, but as long as the those three main components are included in the story, we are interested.

Q3. What are your requirements for a submission?

You can email or mail them. If you have a short story collection, send over your best 3 stories. If you have a novel, send over the first 3 chapters. You can also send a query letter letting us know what you are working on.

Q4. Will you look at someone who has been previously published? And does it matter who published them or in what fashion?

It does not matter if you have been published or not! Every author has been a non-published author at one time or another. As long as your story is well written and falls into the “Suspense” category, we want to see it.

Q5. Do you help promote the novel once it’s published?

One of the biggest problems after you are published is getting it marketed. Authors should not have this headache. It is tough enough to write a story; I know. I’ve tried and you shouldn’t be worried about marketing. We have avenues to market you to the public and will use those resources. Self-promoting is also another way to help, but shouldn’t be the only way.

Q6. Do you charge a fee for reading or any other fee?

There is NEVER a fee to read, NEVER! The only time there could be a fee is when your book is sold, any expense we used to make that happen, could be paid through your royalty check, but never out of your pocket! If an agent charges a reading fee, don’t send it to them!

Q7. Do you have editors of your own that will review a manuscript before it’s sent to a publisher, that is, if you represent the writer?

We have editors that will offer suggestions after we read and accept your work. We check for the normal spelling, grammar and punctuation errors; but will only suggest other ideas if needed. The better the manuscript looks to the publisher, the better chance to get published!

Q8. How can someone submit to you?

Like I mentioned before you can email us or mail to us. Our guidelines are on our website: www.cliffhangeragency.com.

Q9. Do they have to already be published in order for you to look at their work?

NO! Again like I stated before, every author was once a non-published author at one point.

Q10. Do you have a website that contains more information about the company?

Yes; www.cliffhangeragency.com should help you out with answering questions. If not, you can email us and will receive an answer within 24 hours. We feel that you shouldn’t have to wait for an answer to your question.

Q11. Do you have email that people can contact you at? Or would you prefer they go through a contact area on your website?

submissions@cliffhangeragency.com is the main email address.

Q12. Are you involved in anything in the writing world other than the Cliffhanger Literary Agency? If so, how can a writer get involved?

Funny you ask that question because yes, we are. We are a proud sponsor of Suspense Magazine.com. They promote our authors on their site, because they are dedicated, like us, to get great stories out there. You can visit their website at: www.suspensemagazine.com. They have many different things going on.

In closing, I would like to thank you for the opportunity to be interviewed. I hope this helps you out and helps out authors that are struggling. We are here for you and we want to hear from you!

Characters - Believability

2008-10-30T18:21:00.000-07:00

Wow, I can't believe another week has passed! I also can't believe that it's almost November! But, it's good news that it's November. Do you know what November is? It is National Novel Writing Month, or so I'm told.

Before I get on to today's lesson, I am going to do a little survey in honor of National Novel Writing Month. "Ugh! Surveys! I hate those!" I can hear you all saying that, but this one will be fun and you get a prize just for participating! "What? A prize? Okay, tell me more." Is that what I'm hearing now? Anyone who participates, and all questions must be answered, gets to read a short synopsis of my next novel before it's out! In the Name of Revenge is in the hands of my agent, looking for a home. I'm willing to give all participants a leg-up on what's to come. You will be among the first to read what it's all about!

Now that I have your attention, I'm going to get on with the survey:

Q1. Are you published?

Q2. If the answer to Q1 is no, are you working on a novel? If not, do you have any desire to write?

Q3. If the answer to Q1 is yes, what genre do you write in and what is the name of your novel?

Q4. If you have a published novel or if you are working on one, what inspired you to write it?

Q5. If you are published, are you POD, self-published or with a traditional publisher?

Q6. If you are published, did you go directly through a publisher or did you use an agent?

Q7. Give me your thoughts on a writing process. It can be about anything to do with one or more lessons I've already given in my blog, including the one included in this blog.However, your answer to this question can not be substituted for your blog comments. I still want to see your comments! You can click on the Archives to see the lessons to refresh your memory or read those you haven't yet.

Characters - Believability

•When writing, you can tell your reader that a character is irritable and mean, but if you do not show why that is so, the reader will not just accept it as true and will actually feel put off because he or she feels cheated; the reader has not been shown why the character is the way he or she is. Author Rick DeMarinis in The Art & Craft of the Short Story says, “…the main objective of dialogue are to reveal character, to bring relationships into sharp focus, and to advance the story.” (159-160).¹

•DeMarinis points out, “Scenes…put the characters on stage where we can see them. We hear them talk, watch them move, experience their milieu. When the characters are on stage, they reveal themselves in ways a narrator cannot.” (159).² These characters then become believable.

1,2 DeMarinis, Rick. The Art & Craft of the Short Story. Ohio: Story Press, 2000.

Okay, give me some believable characters. I'm waiting to see what you can all do!

By the way, are you anticipating the guest blogger that will be coming up? Don't forget to join me in welcoming a literary agent. No, I'm not revealing his or her name yet. You'll have to wait!

Starr Reina

Character - Believability

2008-10-24T11:49:00.000-07:00

It's Friday! I'm happy to report this very well known fact to everyone!

Today, I'm contining on with my lessons. But before I get to the goodies, I want to announce that soon I will be hosting a Literary Agent as a guest blogger. Everyone needs to see this! He will be discussing many things and everyone, published writer or not, should tune in. I'll announce when he will be on in advance so you can be sure to remember to get over to this blog.

Okay, now on to the goodies I promised. Today, we're discussing Characters - Believability.

Character Believability

When you create your character, be sure to place him or her in the correct setting. For example, would you find a high-powered attorney living in filth in a cabin without electricity? If you do not determine and use the correct setting for your character, he or she will not be believable.

In the famous story “Rip Van Winkle” by Washington Irving¹, the story is set in a village in the mountains near the Hudson River. As the story is told, Rip Van Winkle falls asleep for many years in the mountains. If this setting was in the midst of busy New York City, would it be believable that Rip Van Winkle wanders off to the mountains and falls asleep? Perhaps not. In this example either the entire story seems unlikely or at the very least, the setting.

1 Hopper, Vincent. Classic American Short Stories. New York: Barron’s Educational, 1964.

I would like to see you all create a character (or use one you have) and put him or her in a setting that I would believe that person fits into. Don't put poor Rip in New York City. Make me believe this character is real.

I can't wait to see what you all come up with!

Starr Reina

Character Setting

2008-10-19T15:53:00.000-07:00

I need to first apologize for my delay in my continuing lessons. I hope all is well with everyone.

I am continuing on with the lessons. Today's is Character Settings.

Character Settings

•In Bird by Bird, author Anne Lamott explains the importance of setting (set design). “It may help you to know its feel, its temperature, its colors.” (74).¹ She uses the example of “…the clutter and the cracks in the wall belie a bleakness or brokenness in our lives, while photos and a few rare objects show our pride, our rare shining moments.” (75).²

•The space an act occurs in can make or break a scene.

•Let’s put together setting and description. Author Bret Harte in “Tennessee’s Partner” depicts a storm blowing in and creating havoc: “…the pines beside the cabin were swaying in the storm, and trailing their slender fingers over the roof, and the roar and rush of the swollen river were heard below…” (176).³ The scene is set in Grizzly Cañon near Sandy Bar in 1854 where there are small lodge homes in the wilderness. Harte creates a scene using few words as description. The reader can actually hear the branches hitting the roof of the house and the water gushing past just from this short passage.

1, 2 Lamott, Anne. Bird by Bird. New York: Pantheon Books, 1994.
3 Hopper, Vincent. Classic American Short Stories. New York: Barron’s Educational, 1964

I would like to see some of you put together setting and description. I can't wait to see what you come up with! Remember, I do check these posts and I answer back to you, so remember to check the blog often.

Characters - Description (Continued)

2008-09-26T10:52:00.000-07:00

I'm back and so is the talk of Characters - Description. I hope you have all been enjoying the lessons. I want to remind you that you do not need to be a writer or a published author to chime in. EVERYONE has ideas, whether you realize it or not.

Let's start with today's lesson:

Character Description - Continued

Character description is not just physical characteristics, but also of how the person’s attitude is depicted. For example, author Nathaniel Hawthorne in “The Minister’s Black Veil” shows us how the character Mr. Hooper views himself when he catches a glimpse in the mirror: “At that instant, catching a glimpse of his figure in the looking glass, the black veil involved his own spirit in the horror with which it overwhelmed others. His framed shuddered, his lips grew white, he spilt the untasted wine upon the carpet, and rushed forth into the darkness.” (42). ¹

The reader can see how terrifying Mr. Hooper found himself. This character description is forceful because it is done in just a few words. Mr. Hooper’s entire attitude and the stark reality of the image he portrays to others is plain to see not only to himself, but to the reader as well.
Without description, the story is flat and uninteresting. If the reader cannot see who the character is or why he or she should care about that character, then the reader will simply walk away.

1 Hopper, Vincent. Classic American Short Stories. New York: Barron’s Educational, 1964.

Characters - Description (Continued)

2008-09-19T15:44:00.000-07:00

It's Friday again! The days seem to fly by. Fridays are great though, aren't they? With them comes the weekends AND my blogging lessons. Here's number 4. I can't wait to see your comments.

Characters - Description (Continued)

A reader wants to know what the character looks and acts like – let them visualize the character in more than just height and weight. Author Anne Lamott suggests the creation of a well-rounded individual – “how they stand…what happens in their faces and to their posture when they are thinking, or bored, or afraid.” (45).¹ Lamott asks: “…can you see what your people look like…” (46)?² If you can’t see them, what makes you think your readers will?

1, 2 Lamott, Anne. Bird by Bird. New York: Pantheon Books, 1994.

Okay, what can you show me?

Starr Reina

Characters - Description

2008-09-12T11:57:00.000-07:00

Happy Friday! I am continuing on with my lessons. Today is Lesson 3. Please tell everyone about this blog as it's very educational and even if you don't write, it's fun to read and I don't know anyone who couldn't learn something from someone. So, here it is:

Characters - Description

There are all kinds of characters you can breathe live into:
•You talk to them everyday
•You see them everyday
•Take one thing you notice about one person and combine it with something different from someone else and then embellish
•Vitally important to stories - as a writer, show us what your characters look like

Give me an example of your character description. Make something up or post a character you've already written. Let's see what you have in you!

Here, I'll start. This is a character in a manuscript I'm currently working on:

"Tanisha answered the door, obviously expecting Nick. She was wearing a low-cut, scooped neck, multi-colored top that seemed to drape around her thin shoulders with black satin slacks."

What does this tell you about the character? With just this one description, the reader can see she was probably going out on a date ("obviously expecting Nick" and the description of what she was wearing); she likes to dress well (description of her clothing); she wanted to make an impression on her date ("low-cut, scooped neck..."); and she's a thin woman ("around her thin shoulders...").

Yes, you can create a vivid description of a person in just a few sentences such as I have. That's just a quick example of what character description is about.

Now, it's your turn. Let's see it!

Starr

Premise of a Short Story

2008-09-07T18:07:00.000-07:00

Good evening to everyone. The last (and my first) blog was a success. I want to thank everyone for contributing their ideas to the first lesson.

Here is the second lesson:

Premise of a Short Story

•Dennis Whitcomb in “Developing a Short Story From a Premise” says: “The premise of a story is simply a one-line explanation of your story”(112).
•Test your story by using a premise, making sure that you have character, conflict & resolution.

Oates, Joyce Carol. Writer’s Digest Handbook of Short Story Writing. Ohio: Writer’s Digest Books, 1982.

I would love to see some feedback about this. Perhaps someone would be willing to share a premise. It doesn't have to necessarily be one of a short story, but one of a novel as the idea intermingles. Has anyone read the above referenced book? If not, I do suggest it; it's great.

Let's see some more lively discussion.

Where Story Ideas Come From

2008-09-06T11:14:00.000-07:00

Welcome to QueenWriter News. This blog is new. First, let me introduce myself. My name is Starr Reina. I have two published mystery novels and am a writer of short stories. You may view my website at http://www.queenwriter.com/. If you would like to read some of my stories, please go to: http://www.suspensemagazine.com/starrreina.html. The editor of Suspense Magazine is sponsoring me on his website and he will be changing the stories from time to time, so keep checking back.

With this blog, I hope to share some tips with you that I've learned along the way. I will also be giving "lessons" that, in my optimism, can assist other writers; at least, to some degree.

Before beginning my first lesson, I would like to know what you do. What are your goals? What would you like to see in this blog?

Now, on to my first lesson:

"Where Story Ideas Come From"

•Dreams: waking and sleeping
•Lives: yours and others
•Every day dramas
•Conversations with others
•Newspaper reports
•Television news
•Your imagination
•Everywhere and with everyone - Just look around you!

If anyone has anything to add to this list, I would love to hear it. I look forward to our continued correspondence. Feedback is always appreciated.

Starr Reina